Well done for making the alterations ---but --Don't delete my comments as the examiner will want to see that you respond to feedback - also her will get a better sense of how hard you work! This is another reson why I expect you to REPLY in the comments box below to feedback I give.
Thankyou for your feedback miss, as a result i have changed certain aspects that we discussed in the classroom in order to make this post more concise and strong as a result.
Well done for making the alterations ---but --Don't delete my comments as the examiner will want to see that you respond to feedback - also her will get a better sense of how hard you work! This is another reson why I expect you to REPLY in the comments box below to feedback I give.
ReplyDeleteThankyou for your feedback miss, as a result i have changed certain aspects that we discussed in the classroom in order to make this post more concise and strong as a result.
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